TOPIC: A new song of hope

Hey.
A close friend of mine's family recently went through a really hard divorce. She is an amazing person who has been trying to keep the family together.
As much as it pained her to face the reality that her parents are not healthy. It was fill of hope that she wrote this poem on the night of the first hearing. Hope for a better future for everyone.

She gave me permission to share it.
Would love to hear any feedback tho!

Today I woke up
And said a prayer for you
I prayed that you'd forgive me
For all the stupid things I do

I prayed for all my siblings
A love so pure and true
A love that will never die
Like the love we all feel for you

I said a prayer for understanding
To help gain clarity
To learn the different notes
to create a brand new melody

I prayed for inner peace
to live with Harmony
I prayed for all the scars
to be healed internally

A prayer in my mind
A prayer in the air
A prayer soaring up
He above does care

I made up my mind to say a prayer
Each and every day
A prayer that we all find happiness
in every single way.

Pshhhh, it's really good!!! Do you write poetry Rebo?

Thanks!
Ya i do write poetry... maybe one day Ill post it!

Cool! I do too! I write a lot online and around...maybe I should post them here sometime.

cool...would love to see you work!

I'll send you some links and emails, check them out some time

Hadas Bat-el wrote:
Exactly... when i have time! IYH i will really try.

Hadas Bat-el, I read two or three of your recent posts.
All I can say is WOW!!
I haven't been on there in the longest while. I'm completely in awe, and I am so very proud of you...
And maybe I should move this post to your thread .
I'm so lucky to know you!
(If there is ever something specific that you want me to read you'd have to let me know, as don't really have the time for going on there. But, passed on one post to others. You never know, it may get you more subscribers )
And yeah, your wait is up. And, that makes me really happy.
May you go onwards and upwards...

Aww thanks Ellie!!!! I'm so tired I can barely write.
Thanks, I know you're busy and all...but I really appreciate you passing it on. I hope it can help more people! For curiousity's sake-what post was it?