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A new song of hope 4 years 7 months ago #439

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Hey.
A close friend of mine's family recently went through a really hard divorce. She is an amazing person who has been trying to keep the family together.
As much as it pained her to face the reality that her parents are not healthy. It was fill of hope that she wrote this poem on the night of the first hearing. Hope for a better future for everyone.

She gave me permission to share it.
Would love to hear any feedback tho!

Today I woke up
And said a prayer for you
I prayed that you'd forgive me
For all the stupid things I do

I prayed for all my siblings
A love so pure and true
A love that will never die
Like the love we all feel for you

I said a prayer for understanding
To help gain clarity
To learn the different notes
to create a brand new melody

I prayed for inner peace
to live with Harmony
I prayed for all the scars
to be healed internally

A prayer in my mind
A prayer in the air
A prayer soaring up
He above does care

I made up my mind to say a prayer
Each and every day
A prayer that we all find happiness
in every single way.
**They laugh at me because Im different,
I laugh at them because they are all the same.
**If you are not for yourself, who will be for you?
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A new song of hope 4 years 7 months ago #440

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Pshhhh, it's really good!!! Do you write poetry Rebo?
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A new song of hope 4 years 7 months ago #444

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Thanks!
Ya i do write poetry... maybe one day Ill post it!
**They laugh at me because Im different,
I laugh at them because they are all the same.
**If you are not for yourself, who will be for you?
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A new song of hope 4 years 7 months ago #446

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Cool! I do too! I write a lot online and around...maybe I should post them here sometime.
Welcome to the FHO forum!
I'm Hadas Bat-el founder of FHO! I'm also a poet, blogger, writer, copywriter, and proud redhead! You can read my blog here: frumhangout.com/index.php/blog/item/hadas-bat-el-2 , I post every Sunday!

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A new song of hope 4 years 7 months ago #447

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cool...would love to see you work!
**They laugh at me because Im different,
I laugh at them because they are all the same.
**If you are not for yourself, who will be for you?
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A new song of hope 4 years 7 months ago #448

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I'll send you some links and emails, check them out some time :)
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A new song of hope 4 years 7 months ago #454

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Hadas Bat-el wrote:
some time :)

Exactly... when i have time! IYH i will really try.
**They laugh at me because Im different,
I laugh at them because they are all the same.
**If you are not for yourself, who will be for you?
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A new song of hope 4 years 7 months ago #456

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Hadas Bat-el, I read two or three of your recent posts.
All I can say is WOW!!
I haven't been on there in the longest while. I'm completely in awe, and I am so very proud of you...
And maybe I should move this post to your thread ;).
I'm so lucky to know you!
(If there is ever something specific that you want me to read you'd have to let me know, as don't really have the time for going on there. But, passed on one post to others. You never know, it may get you more subscribers B) )
And yeah, your wait is up. And, that makes me really happy.
May you go onwards and upwards...
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A new song of hope 4 years 7 months ago #458

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Aww thanks Ellie!!!! I'm so tired I can barely write.
Thanks, I know you're busy and all...but I really appreciate you passing it on. I hope it can help more people! For curiousity's sake-what post was it?
Welcome to the FHO forum!
I'm Hadas Bat-el founder of FHO! I'm also a poet, blogger, writer, copywriter, and proud redhead! You can read my blog here: frumhangout.com/index.php/blog/item/hadas-bat-el-2 , I post every Sunday!

I can't wait to get to know you all! So what are you waiting for?! START POSTING!

You can also reach me at This email address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it. if you have any questions, comments, or you want to help with the site!
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