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Sometimes when your in a dark place you think youve been buried but really youve been planted..... 8 years 6 months ago #590

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I didnt write this a girl in America wrote this, I think its stunning...

Buried between layers and trapped between stones,

The little white seed felt trapped and alone.

Oh how she longed to bloom and sprout,

But there she was stuck waiting to be dug out.

Her heart sang a sad song,

She tried her best to remain helpful and strong.

Her tears began to pour out,

Falling softly to the ground.

Yet little would she know,

That it would be those tears that would help her grow.

Every day she cried and cried,

It was so unfair she wondered why.

And then it happened she began to grow,

The growing pains causing tears to continuously flow.

A warm glow shining down,

The sun had made its way underground.

The feeling of happiness she held on so tight,

It lit up her darkness like a magical light.

Her tears and sunshine started to lift her out the ground,

The little white seed began to sprout.

A little stem grew tall and proud,

Her colours started coming out.

Colours like no one had ever seen,

Stem and leaves the perfect shade of green.

In the garden she stood tall,

Admired by all.
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Sometimes when your in a dark place you think youve been buried but really youve been planted..... 8 years 6 months ago #601

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Another one from her:

My heart is full of anger,

I pretend you are a stranger.

I hide my face and look away,

Can’t remember the last time I prayed.

Frozen tears I hold back,

Emptiness because I feel connection I lack.

I pretend not to care,

I am scared to allow myself to feel.

You Hashem watch my suffer from way up high,

I hear the echo of my own cry.

I feel like Your ignoring me and You don’t care,

I just want to end my life and disappear.

Searching for guidance but no one seems to care,

So I turn to You Hashem with a heart full of despair.

Hashem you put me in this situation,

Please grant me my salvation.

Give me the key,

Let me break free.

Put navigation in heart,

Please guide me through the dark.

Help me accept your decision,

Even if it’s not what i envision.

I try to let go of being in control,

It’s your decisions Hashem I have to trust I know.

I will still experience life’s ups and downs,

But I feel safe in Hashem’s hands.

I am flung up and down but Hashem won’t let me fall,

He’s there when I’m silent and don’t call.

He’s holding my hand guiding me through,

I can feel He’s here if I allow myself to.
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Sometimes when your in a dark place you think youve been buried but really youve been planted..... 8 years 5 months ago #606

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Thanks so much for sharing! I love the rawness of this- you write with your heart on the page and I can really appreciate how genuine you are. THANKS!!
'A person can't decide to sit on the sidelines in this world. Once we're born, we're on the playing field that means we have to pick up that ball of life's challenges and begin running with it towards our goal'
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